牙膏
发表于 2006-7-8 23:15:00
It was <font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff0033;">said</font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff;"> that France won the game on penalty,the result </font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff0066;">was</font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff;"> 1:o,Portugal ha</font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff0066;">d</font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff;"> no luck,good bye......</font>
老鼠卖大米
发表于 2006-7-9 09:43:00
<p>Don't be shy!!! Show yourself on your <font color="#ff0033">own</font> <font color="#000000">language</font> <font color="#ff0033">and</font> you will find it <font color="#ff0033"><strike>is</strike>
</font><font color="#000000">w<font color="#ff0033">o</font>nderful</font> .</p><p> </p><p>I found 4 wrong places.</p>
老鼠卖大米
发表于 2006-7-9 10:10:00
<p>There is a air of romance about the capital of the France---Paris,</p><p>but in Italy ,especial in Roma,many ancient figure are very </p><p>famous to the world.</p>
雀之琳
发表于 2006-7-10 00:12:00
Oh,it's too hard!
牙膏
发表于 2006-7-10 18:52:00
<p>aha ~!!!</p><p> let me have a try!!!</p><p>There is a<font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff0033;">n</font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff;"> air of romance about the capital of</font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff;"><br/> </font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff0066;">the(删)</font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff;"> France---Paris,but in Italy ,especial<font color="#000000" style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff0033;">ly<font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff;"> in Roma,many ancient figure<font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff0033;">s</font> are very <p>famous to the world.</p><p> I also found 4 errors!Show myself,i don't shy!!!</p></font></font></font></p><p>famous to the world.</p><p> I also found 4 errors!Show myself,i don't shy!!!</p><p></p>
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牙膏
发表于 2006-7-10 19:03:00
You are very strong.I am afraid of being beat,that makes me have no choice but to having a challenge!
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老鼠卖大米
发表于 2006-7-10 19:05:00
<p>No,‘figure' just a C.N, so ‘figures’is correct.</p><p>And ,where is your problem? I just want to have a look.</p>
牙膏
发表于 2006-7-10 19:06:00
ok
牙膏
发表于 2006-7-10 19:07:00
You are very strong.I am afraid of being beat,that makes me have no choice but to having a challenge!!!
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老鼠卖大米
发表于 2006-7-11 09:25:00
<p>You are very strong.I am afraid of being beat,that makes me have no choice<font color="#ff0000">s</font> but <font color="#ff0000"><strike>to</strike></font> <font color="#ff0000">have</font> a challenge!!!</p><p> </p><p>Bingo~!!</p><p> </p><p> </p>